The previous chapter has been rewritten, so you can take a look. You need to refresh to see it.
Originally it was 6200 words, now it is 7142 words. After deletions and additions, a lot of content has changed.
However, the theme remains the same.
Let me talk about the reasons for the modification, mainly because of everyone’s opinions on Yan Liuyuan’s darkening.
Now that I have suffered from insomnia, I decided to review this chapter again and look at my shortcomings.
First of all, what I want to say is that I don’t agree with the term blackening, because as I said, every character in this book only has his own position and cannot use intuitive kindness. To distinguish between evil.
So Yan Liuyuan did not suddenly become a devil with all kinds of evil, he just had to go his own way.
Secondly, let me summarize the shortcomings of the previous chapter here. Because I was anxious to update, I did not do enough foreshadowing, which was very ill-considered. When updating, I also vaguely felt that something was missing, as if It seemed like I hadn't written anything about what had happened, so I struggled for an hour.
So many times I update around five o'clock in the afternoon, but yesterday it was delayed until six o'clock, and I had no choice but to update in the end.
I have to admit that the foreshadowing is not enough.
So the main direction of modification is here.
On the one hand, Yan Liuyuan felt that he could no longer face Ren Xiaosu. In other words, it was not that he could not face Ren Xiaosu, but that he could not face his past self.
As I posted on Weibo, "Many people will be unable to face their past selves when they grow up."
On the other hand, what everyone has always been curious about is the colorful What is the price of Yuan's current curse?
I wanted to talk about this when he returned to the grassland to face Sister Xiaoyu, but suddenly I found that it was no longer possible not to talk about it here, so I also included it in the previous chapter. .
This is also one of the reasons for the so-called "blackening".
On the other hand, the grassland needs him. When he is around Ren Xiaosu, he feels more like Ren Xiaosu's vassal. But in the grassland, it is not that he needs others, but that others need him. .
That’s why Qiqige said what she said.
So in my opinion, Yan Liuyuan made these choices for comprehensive reasons, not for any specific reason.
But due to the hasty update and not writing it, I can only refine it again. In the future, I may go back and refine it a third time. Even after this book is finished, I will go back and refine it chapter by chapter. Until you are satisfied.
You can look back and discuss it here.
I had insomnia again today, and those few hours at night were very painful. I am really afraid that because of the need to ensure the amount of updates, I will have regrets like the king again. This feeling is for a storyteller, So sad.
Sorry.
Another thing is that the wall of rupture is not between Ren Xiaosu and Yan Liuyuan.It’s not that I don’t want to abuse you, but the two people in this story, whether analyzed from the perspective of character, heart, or even the world, will not turn against each other. This is how I view them from an objective perspective. It's human, so there's no need to forcefully create shit.
There is no conflict of interest. If Yan Liuyuan really wanted to be the king of the world, what would Ren Xiaosu do based on his character? Ren Xiaosu has never been a person who would kill relatives for justice, or so I think.
The ending of this story has long been decided. A magnificent era should not be a one-man show of one or two people.
Finally, I would like to talk to you all with a sincere attitude. I hope that if this situation occurs again in the future and I fail to update on time, everyone will be more tolerant.
After all, it’s quite heartbreaking to see you leave messages saying that I don’t keep my word. I will try my best to do my best, at least to the best of my abilities.
Thank you everyone.