PS: Seeing that everyone’s discussion point is completely off-base, I am re-posting the single chapter, the update is on the way...
Some details have been modified in the previous chapter, and Changshou is in desperation for Yuelao. The deceptive words have been slightly changed. If the reader is dissatisfied, the author would like to apologize here. There is a problem with the writing technique and improper handling of words. He will pay attention to such details in the future and apologize.
Some readers reported disrespect for feelings;
First of all, Li Changshou is not a perfect character. From the beginning of this article, he has many fallacies, which is not in line with the positive attitude. Mainstream view.
In his opinion, the fox girl's relationship was just an unexpected and unnecessary cause and effect, and he would kill it if he should.
If the author hadn't used the background of the fox girl to persuade Changshou, it would have been possible for Changshou to directly promote her. Fortunately, he persuaded her.
Secondly, there should be no problem with the writing of these two chapters. They are just about causing trouble, solving it, and leading to the subsequent story line.
After reading the entire review, the problem lies in two parts.
First, the reader has empathy for the fox girl;
This weird author, in order to make the image of the fox girl too simple, makes the image of the fox girl too simple. I don't want to write too much about her, which will give readers the impression of a 'beautiful and infatuated woman' who can be sympathized with.
The author Jun here solemnly apologizes, but this is not a writing mistake, because the outline requires that the fox girl must have this image...
Second, 'Oh shit, send it off' I don’t want the women who come to my door to talk to me. I’ll teach them dirty words. '
No need to explain this. Li Changshou has his own ideas...
[The following is the content of the previous chapter]:
Reader Sir It looks a little confusing, but there are actually a few points that I didn’t point out clearly in the text, because I want everyone to recall it...
But it seems that many readers didn’t get it.
First of all, any character in the book that takes more than two pages is useful.
Let’s talk about the [red thread issue] first. 1. Why is the red rope wrapped around Qi Yuan and not Li Changshou.
Answer: Because this is a hint that the fox girl fell in love with a concrete figure, rather than really falling in love with the man who appeared in front of her at that time.
After seeing this, Li Changshou came to the conclusion that you were just lonely.
Qi Yuan Lao Dao does not have the thread corresponding to the red rope of the fox demon. This is because Qi Yuan himself has no intersection with the fox demon.
If the fox girl really falls in love with the man who appears in front of her, the red line is to find Li Changshou.
2. Are the fox girl’s feelings sincere?
Answer: In her own opinion, it is sincere and extremely sincere.
But from Li Changshou’s point of view, it should be confirmed.
3. Yue Lao breaks people's marriages and does not respect emotional issues.
The image of Yuelao, itsIn fact, the emotions in the book world are embodied, reflecting the force majeure in reality. Yue Lao can bring them together or break them up, but they are described many times, which affects the state of mind.
The emotions in the book can make Yuelao regress. Bian Zhuang's twelve-year bitter love is the best proof. At that time, Yue Lao wanted to arrange a good match for Bian Zhuang.
In reality, as long as two people are determined enough, they can overcome all difficulties, but the book is more idealistic.
If you want to discuss the emotional issues between men and women in reality, and put aside reality to talk about pure love, that would be immature, and the author cannot provide guidance in this regard.
4. The problem of Yunxiao’s red line.
Yunxiao is an innate being with extraordinary cultivation. He jumps out of the Three Realms and is not in the Five Elements, so he is not affected by the Palace of Marriage.
Otherwise, the Master will definitely...
5. The identity of the fox demon.
The next chapter will reveal that this time Li Changshou is equivalent to preaching, and updates are on the way.
It’s lonely~