(I originally posted this on a book review thread last night, but the post seems to have been swallowed up by my mother-in-law, so I’ll tell you about it here.)
Let me talk about the character Xiaolan before going to bed.
Due to the conception of the story line, the plot can only be revealed a little bit. When many readers jumped out to talk about this paragraph these days, the author was quite helpless. He couldn't spoil it, so he could only guarantee it. Saying it is not a gift for a daughter is not a gift for a daughter.
Xiaolan’s relationship with Qiyuan, until today, was based on her own unrequited love and fantasy character. It was the author’s insinuation of the female boxer.
[By changing Xiaolan’s character into a male and her master into a female, does this section make her become an infatuated man who is easily scolded as shameless? ]
The first time Li Changshou saw Xiaolan's red rope wrapping around his master in the void, he already had murderous intentions.
Yes, murderous intentions. Hidden under the happy words are Li Changshou's true attitude towards Xiaolan. I won't go into details.
But the first time Xiaolan went to Xiaoqiong Peak, he was not sure about destroying the Qingqiu clan, and there was the shadow of Nuwa behind the Qingqiu clan, so he did not dare to do it, so he could only use some strange methods. It was too glorious a way to reject Xiaolan on behalf of the master.
——I was sprayed that time too.
You can judge from the perspective of the protagonist. If Xiaolan and the master get married, Xiaolan discovers that the master is not who she imagined, and the consequences will be disastrous.
So there was the criticism from readers.
The second time Xiaolan went to Xiaoqiong Peak, Li Changshou had never thought of it...
At this time, Li Changshou's mentality changed. He had already killed the Qingqiu clan. , he knew that Nuwa would not care much about the demon clan now, so in his eyes, Xiaolan became a beautiful and controllable trouble to a certain extent.
This is what Qi Yuan felt, the change in Li Changshou's mentality, and the subsequent admonishment.
This is why readers said that Li Changshou had problems with his operation and found it unacceptable...
In this book, senior brother, there is no perfect character, there is no perfect character, Li Changshou Those who live a long life and are good at making arrangements will inevitably suffer from the disadvantage of "making their own decisions".
Although it is a light comedy fairy tale, although many people think that fast food literature is not worth mentioning, it is enough to be enjoyable;
But the most basic thing about a book is to respect the characters The positive and negative aspects.
Especially when he discovered that Nuwa had tied Qi Yuan and Xiao Lan with red ropes for unknown reasons, Li Changshou suspected that there was something bigger going on, and was still waiting to see what would happen.
Because he knows his master.
Chapter 383 is a chapter that has been planned and prepared for a long time. It is the key to upgrading Qi Yuan’s character. It is also a small turning point for Li Changshou. Xiaolan’s plot in the early stage is all for this.
In fact, you don’t have to worry about similar situations. The author definitely has a lot of germs and will not deliberately poison you.
And I want to find opportunities to make some reasonable small changes in Li Changshou's already formed or even finalized character.Being more full and three-dimensional is very difficult in itself...
In fact, it is the sentence in the article.
When reaching a deadlock, the quickest solution is to introduce external forces.
The next step will be a refreshing rhythm, and I will try my best to update you all.
If any readers feel unhappy because of the previous plot development...
Sometimes we really just need a little patience and wait for two or three chapters to be updated. This is already the author's fault. Literary creation and the final stubbornness of the market.