Damn, there are really too many problems with this Fengshen Romance.
The more I analyze and analyze, the more I feel that this is not just a matter of fatalism, but something that is distorted relative to today's mainstream thinking.
Many readers may also feel that under the shadow of Fengshen Yanyi, the text that should have been relaxing has become a bit breathless.
I have put a lot of effort into the current Fengshen script. For example, I have taken great pains to prevent Nezha from being tragic, but the effect of writing it is not satisfactory, because Nezha, who was born out of the Fengshen script, himself The core is not as lovable as the Devil Boy script.
I originally thought that my writing skills were not good enough, but looking back, I realized that it was not just my ability, but the core issue of why The Romance of the Gods cannot be compared with the four famous works.
He has the distortion of human nature caused by feudal Neo-Confucianism, but he has lost the extension of the arc of human nature and his resistance to feudal thought.
I actually don’t want to write the original story nodes of Fengshen, but if several nodes are not connected in series, it will be something else entirely. This is what I hesitate the most.
That is - should we retain respect for the original work of Fengshen Romance while changing the magic to Fengshen?
For example, if Taiyi kills Shi Ji, the image Taiyi created before will be destroyed, but without killing Shi Ji, Taozu cannot let Taiyi go. From the rationality and story logic, this Even the dark side that Taiyi had to reveal was seriously inconsistent with the relaxed writing style we pursued, creating a strong sense of fragmentation, and I couldn't dig deeper into the character on this basis.
Really, this thing made me sleep poorly for several nights, and my hair fell out in handfuls.
I looked backwards at the subsequent plot. If I followed the script that I had worked hard on for several months, the distortion of the characters would be even stronger.
This kind of creation feels very painful, but I chose this path and can only keep struggling and trying new things.
What is the core of the Fengshen system?
The preset justice is the so-called destiny.
This is the beginning of the ideological trend of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, which promoted Zhou and demoted Zhou, and things were constantly distorted layer by layer.
It was only yesterday that I gritted my teeth and decided to break the original barriers.
——The dozen souls who should have died in the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation, but now appeared in the Conferred God Platform.
In the previous chapter, Li Changshou closed the door of his heart, which represented another direction.
Fengshen will no longer have any shadow of the original work from now on. It’s not that I don’t respect the original work of Fengshen Yanyi, it’s just because the original work has too many flaws and not many of them can be praised by today’s society. , positive energy things.
The author Jun really tried his best and was almost driven crazy by the novel "Feng Shen Yan".
My original plan was to end Conferring Gods and start entering the final chapter, but now, the final chapter, which was originally over 100,000 words, may be longer and focus on the process of transforming Hu into Buddha as the thickness of the plot. Makes up for it, but doesn’t drag out the plot.
The follow-up Tribulation of the Gods will use three plots as a series to dig deeper into some of the more popular characters and avoid introducing more unimportant characters.
Little Nezha's script lacks tragedy and is not very touching. This is the most troublesome thing, but I must respect the style of writing and not write tragedy.
A reader said in his chapter, "You got the author right." It really made me almost cry.
In fact, I have always been stuck in a weird thinking circle and wanted to re-edit Fengshen. In fact, the re-editing did not break away from the framework of Fengshen, so now I am in a huge creative dilemma.
Now I think about it, there is no need to rewrite it at all. What I wrote was Senior Brother, not the Romance of the Gods.
Learning experience and lessons, this is also a test on the way to writing
Senior brother, this book is not only an improvement in writing skills, but also an improvement in my grasp of the core of the story. I will Summarize repeatedly and continue to work hard.
However, the Fengshen plot has little impact on the overall situation. Li Changshou is now in a situation of confrontation with the sky (I can only say that fortunately I added the main plot to the Fengshen script).
The consequences behind Changshou will be unexpected, if anyone guesses it.
Then I will eat the keyboard on the spot! (I’m kidding, I’m kidding, there are only a dozen possibilities in total)
Let’s continue typing. The next chapter should be late in the morning, because no one will compete with me for the apartment. (No)