I'm very sorry, but my writing state is still very bad recently. I sat in front of the computer all night, and I just feel that the characters in my writing are pale and weak, and I can't find the feeling I had before.
Actually, I also know the reason. Now the plot has reached a dead end and I need to find a breaking point.
A great author once said that if you want the plot of a book to continue to develop, the protagonist needs to be in a state of lacking certain resources for a long time. In this way, the protagonist has the ability to work hard and go. Motivation to take risks.
The main logic of this book is the process of the protagonist constantly fighting for resources in order to reach the seventh realm.
I told you before that the reason for Kavin was that the heroine was changed.
But it’s not the heroine herself who has a problem.
But because Shi Xiaohan was able to provide Gu Xu with a large amount of resources, allowing him to be in a relatively comfortable environment. According to Gu Xu's steady character, he had no reason to take risks or use any other methods. Compete with others in terms of ability.
He can completely stay at home and cultivate to become a saint, and then achieve a happy ending.
Therefore, everyone may feel that the protagonist’s motivations are far-fetched in the previous arena matches and the academy’s talisman battle. In that plot, there was almost no sense of expectation and tension that touched people's hearts.
If you want the plot to continue, this relatively comfortable balance must be broken, and the protagonist must be exposed to crises and conflicts, as well as the desire for certain resources.
After racking my brains for a few days, I finally came up with a solution to this problem without killing the heroine.
However, during the actual writing process, I felt very awkward. It felt like the characters had collapsed and turned into lifeless marionettes. It was impossible to move forward at all, and it was very painful to write. It's just like getting a question for a college entrance examination essay that has no idea at all. Every line of words has to be pieced together and squeezed out.
Sometimes I feel so uncomfortable that I even want to refer to the original outline and start a new book. After all, the fault tolerance rate of online stories is really low. If you make a wrong decision on impulse in the main plot, the whole plot may collapse, and there is no chance to modify it.
But later I still felt that I should face the problem head on and do my best to solve it.
The editor also said that it is necessary to have experience in writing a long novel with more than one million words, and to be able to learn enough lessons from it. Otherwise, the mistakes you make now may be made again even if you open a new book.
So I hope you can give me a little more time to think about ways to break this deadlock.
I’m really sorry qaq
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